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Offline Kinky Katrina

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In the Back
« on: June 09, 2022, 04:07:49 AM »
No one can hear us while we're in the back.
The music outside masks my euphoric moans and her drowsy complaints,
keeping the sounds of our encounter trapped safely in the back.

No one will come looking for her in the back.
She had decided to head home early according to the text her friends received.
They had no reason to suspect she was taking it in the back.

It was easy to bring her to the back.
All it took was faithful patience and an unguarded drink.
She couldn't protest as I dragged her to the back.

There is no escape in the back.
The drugs in her brain keep her more than sleepy enough to subdue.
She belongs to me in the back.

I can take my time tasting her in the back,
relishing the way her body shifts in discomfort as I lick it's crevices.
I love being alone with her in the back. 

Her life ended in the back.
Tonight's memory shall tarnish her future endeavors, while enhancing mine.
We will always remember the way I raped her in the back ❤️
« Last Edit: July 19, 2022, 01:47:17 PM by Kinky Katrina »
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Re: In the Back
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2022, 06:35:34 AM »
I don't really have much of grasp on poetry so that's admittedly why this piece doesn't really flow very well imo. But I thought it was neat little idea so I wrote it anyway. Just let me know if you think maybe it doesn't belong in the poetry section?
« Last Edit: June 15, 2022, 03:03:52 PM by Kinky Katrina »
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Re: In the Back
« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2022, 07:48:49 AM »
I have no feeling for poetry at all, but this seemed to flow really well and I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: In the Back
« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2022, 03:05:31 PM »
Quote from: Shocker on June 15, 2022, 07:48:49 AM
I have no feeling for poetry at all, but this seemed to flow really well and I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Oh awesome! Thank you so much for commenting :)
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Re: In the Back
« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2022, 07:29:30 AM »
First time I've wandered into the poetry section and glad I did.
There's something quite haunting over the beautiful words you've used to describe a scene so seedy.  I love the natural cadence of the repeated "in the back" refrain.
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Re: In the Back
« Reply #5 on: July 18, 2022, 03:43:27 AM »
Quote from: TheYellowKnight on July 04, 2022, 07:29:30 AM
First time I've wandered into the poetry section and glad I did.
There's something quite haunting over the beautiful words you've used to describe a scene so seedy.  I love the natural cadence of the repeated "in the back" refrain.

So glad you liked it! Your praise truly means a lot ❤️
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