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Offline Swashbuckler

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Your Fields Burn
« on: May 21, 2016, 10:56:03 PM »

 
Across the river through the woods
Alone in gathered darkness
Gone where you never should
And where you will find no rest
A chill runs through the wild, wild wind
A cold, cold chill runs down your spine
A quick step, your head starts to spin
Your pulse boils to double time
You should never have come here
Little red wine, little red dress
Now you have your fill of fear
Just look now at your quiet distress
As you look back into my eyes
The cracked mirror never lies
So far past the point of no return
As I force my seed, your fields burn
 
 
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Re: Your Fields Burn
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2017, 09:13:40 AM »
Wonderful visuals

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Re: Your Fields Burn
« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2017, 12:39:34 AM »

@LonleyWife923  Thanks for enjoying
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Re: Your Fields Burn
« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2018, 05:40:46 PM »
A chill runs through the wild, wild wind
A cold, cold chill runs down your spine

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Re: Your Fields Burn
« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2018, 01:02:17 PM »
Very nice and frightening take on Little
Red Riding hood. You painted a vibrant picture- I can see the red dress and wine and feel the chill of the wind in the dark woods.

I also love the description of this victim’s POV, seen through the eyes of her predator, as her senses and adrenaline kick into high gear when she realizes her imminent danger.  It is fascinating how you showed that moment of connection between predator and prey, like when a bunny looks around and freezes
in place when it suddenly notices the cat ready to pounce. Love that.
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