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Offline Carlosdevil

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The Fist
« on: June 12, 2016, 02:47:58 AM »
I came across this poem I wrote at 19 years old. It will give you an idea of how far I've come. Don't take it as a representation of where my mental state is now.

I feel as if I'm trapped within a fist
I imagine by deaths cold embrace I'm kissed
Trapped within a cage of my own device
The claws of demons rake my soul and my eyes

Tired beyond all hope I yearn for rest
I get no surcease for my sins confessed
Redemption may await past hallowed doors
But no such destination lies upon my course

I go through the motions of life day to day
I know deep inside I deserve this sad fate
Love is reserved for those who deserve such things
Not for me not for love there will be no diamond rings

Sometimes I wonder as I lay in the dark alone
What must I do for my sins to atone
There is no forgiveness for one such as me
Alone and unwanted that's just how it must be

So here crushed by grief in this case I must dwell
The single inhabitant of my own private hell
For deserved am I for being so reviled
I who have taken the life of a child

So let this fist closed and crush the life from me
It is less than I deserve for my sad reality
Let me trade places with Matthew I pray
It's the least I can do and all I can pay
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Offline Sem

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Re: The Fist
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2016, 06:15:23 PM »
Wow [member=49]Carlosdevil[/member] that is powerful and gripping and sad all at the same time.

By the way I LOVE your new signature

Offline LonelyWife923

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Re: The Fist
« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2017, 04:33:37 PM »
[member=49]Carlosdevil[/member] I adored this poem

Offline Marg4724

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Re: The Fist
« Reply #3 on: June 27, 2017, 01:05:04 AM »
Totally thought a poem titled "Fist" was gonna go a different way... Enjoyed it. 
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