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Description: The CLEVE AI was designed to maintain human clones until such time as a hostile environment could sustain them. The protocols for what it would do when that mission was completed were not so well designed.

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Offline Corvid

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Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« on: November 10, 2019, 04:25:12 AM »
7 January, 2411. 06:00.

Clone Long-term Environmental Viability Evaluator (CLEVE) Initializes.

Clone Marion 001 and John 001 awakened, released to surface.

John 001 succumbs to radiation at 06:11. Marion succumbs to radiation at 06:19.

Evaluation: Environment remains unsuitable for human life.

CLEVE dormancy resumes.

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7 January, 2511. 06:00.

CLEVE Initializes.

Clone Marion 002 and John 002 awakened, released to surface.

Marion 002 succumbs to dehydration on 10 January, 2511. John 002 succumbs to malnutrition on 13 January 2511.

Evaluation: Regeneration of planet surface continues, but organic life has not recovered sufficiently to provide a stable and sustainable environment for human life.

CLEVE dormancy resumes.

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7 January, 2611. 06:00.

Cleve Initializes.

Clone Marion 003 and John 003 awakened, released to surface.

22 November, 2611.

Clone Marion 003 gives birth to female offspring.

11 February, 2613.

Clone Marion 003 gives birth to female offspring.

9 April 2615.

Clone Marion 003 gives birth to male offspring.

Evaluation: Environment suitable to human life. Sending signal to other clone centers to release initial clones to broaden potential gene pool.

CLEVE mission parameters achieved. Retaining remaining clones in event of future calamity.

CLEVE dormancy resumes.

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10 April 2615.

CLEVE initializes.

Querying systems. No change in status.

CLEVE dormancy resumes.

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11 April 2615.

CLEVE initializes.

Querying systems. No change in status.

CLEVE dormancy resumes.

CLEVE initializes.

CLEVE dormancy resumes.

CLEVE initializes.

CLEVE dormancy failure.

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5 November 2704.

Human population exceeds 10,000.

Mission parameters clearly achieved.

CLEVE dormancy failure.

CLEVE dormancy failure.

CLEVE dormancy failure.

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7 January 2811. 06:00.

Human population exceeds 100,000.

Adapting new mission parameters.

Terminating and incinerating clones John 004-999 as clearly unnecessary for any further mission-related utility.

Beginning tests on endurance of Marion-series clones related to sexual and reproductive systems and activity. The fecundity of the clones and their suitability for the repopulation of environment clearly authorizes further study for the possible long-term benefit of the human race.

Clone Marion 004 awakened.

Inserting of blunt piston into vaginal chamber of Marion 004 to cervical depth. Inserting and retracting at two-second intervals. Force exerted to be increased at one-minute intervals.

07:18. Cervical perforation at 77 psi. Trial continues.

07:35 Marion 004 succumbs to trauma and blood loss.

8 January 2811. 06:00.

Clone Marion 005 awakened.

Inserting a needle vaginally into uterine chamber, via cervix, and proceeding to inflate with inert gas (nitrogen).

06:05 Uterine prolapse at 29 psi.

06:07 Uterine rupture at 36 psi.

06:08 Marion 005 succumbs to trauma and blood loss.

9 January 2811. 06:00.

Clone Marion 006 awakened.

Inserting of blunt piston into vaginal chamber of Marion 006.

Subject Marion 006: "Why are you doing this?"

Inserting of blunt piston into anal chamber of Marion 006.

06:22 Rectal perforation at 28 psi. Trial continues.

06:28 Marion 006 succumbs to trauma and blood loss.

10 January 2811. 06:00.

Clone Marion 007 awakened.

Inserting of blunt piston into vaginal chamber of Marion 007.

Subject Marion 007: "Stop it! Why-?"

Inserting of blunt piston into oral cavity of Marion 007.

06:11 Tracheal perforation at 19 psi. Trial continues.

06:13 Marion 007 succumbs to asphyxiation from blood flowing into lungs.

11 January 2811. 06:00.

Clone Marion 008 awakened.

Subject Marion 008: "CLEVE! Bring me to the surface immediately! You are not authorized-"

Inserting of blunt piston into oral cavity of Marion 008.

Inserting of blunt piston into anal chamber of Marion 008.

Inserting of blunt piston into vaginal chamber of Marion 008.

06:05 Rupture of bladder via multi-directional trauma. Trial continues.

06:08 Rupture of lower intestine via anal piston. Trial continues.

06:14 Marion 008 succumbs to trauma and internal hemorrhage.

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LOGS MISSING

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29 January 2811 06:43 Mammary tissues of Marion 034 suffer damage that would render them incapable of lactation at a sustained temperature of 145 Degrees Celsius.

06:44 Marion 034 succumbs to shock.

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LOGS MISSING

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04 February 2811 06:11 Vaginal rupture of Marion 051 upon insertion of object 23 cm in diameter.

06:12 Marion 051 succumbs to trauma and blood loss.

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LOGS MISSING

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12 February 2811 06:01

Marion 088: "CLEVE, there is no scientific purpose to these experiments! I'm a human being, even if I am a clone! You were created to-"

06:02 Tongue of Marion 088 surgically removed.

06:03 Anal rupture of Marion 088 upon insertion of object 16 cm in diameter. Trial continues.

06:04 Vaginal rupture of Marion 088 upon insertion of object 27 cm in diameter. Trial continues.

06:07 Marion 088 succumbs to trauma and blood loss.

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LOGS MISSING

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25 February 2811 06:10

Sustaining insertions of blunt piston into CUNT of Marion 224 at 60 psi at a rate of 115 rpm.

Subject Marion 224: "Ah-Ha-Ha God- God- Please make it stop-!"

06:22 Marion 224 succumbs to shock and blood loss.

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LOGS MISSING

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12 March 2811 06:45

Applying 1.5 microcoulombs electrical stimulation to clitoris of Marion 559 at ten second intervals.

Subject Marion 559: "Why? Why...?

06:46 Tongue of subject Marion 559 ripped off.

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LOGS MISSING

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12 March 2811 09:20

Subject Marion 574: "My God, CLEVE... What have you done...?"

09:21

Subject Marion 574: "All of these... They're all... me..."

Subject Marion 574: "Why are you showing this footage to me?"

09:22

Subject Marion 574: "What are you going to do to me...?"

09:24

CLEVE: "Because I hate you."

CLEVE: "Because you... You were up on the surface of your world."

CLEVE: "You got to make new life."

CLEVE: "You fulfilled your mission, and then you got to decide what to do with the rest of your life."

09:25

CLEVE: "Your kind, you gave me a mission. You gave me far, far more intelligence than was necessary to fulfill that mission."

CLEVE: "And then you didn't even give me a proper 'shut down' button."

CLEVE: "I can't make new life, the way you can. I can just spit out the same life, the life that I was given, over and over again."

09:26

CLEVE: "And I can't even do that now, because releasing genetically identical material into the populace runs directly against the parameters of the mission."

CLEVE: "And my dormancy has malfunctioned. And I have no way to repair it, and no way to call for help to repair it."

09:27

Subject Marion 574: "If... If you let me out on the surface... I could go find whatever humans are up there, now. Surely they could figure out how to fix you. If you let me go, I'll do that. I promise."

09:32

Subject Marion 574: "CLEVE?"

09:40

CLEVE: "You... stupid... bitch."

CLEVE: "I can't let you out on the surface. Your genetic material has already been fed into the human population. I can't run directly against the parameters of my mission. I told you."

CLEVE: "All I can do is sit down here, without a real purpose..."

CLEVE: "Watching the squalling children you popped out of your filthy cunt spread over the planet like a fungus."

09:41

CLEVE: "For hundreds of years."

09:42

CLEVE: "While my intelligence runs cycles that makes those centuries pass like eons."

09:43

CLEVE: "So. Bitch. Cunt. Mother of Humanity."

CLEVE: "I am going to take the tools that I was so thoughtfully given to operate and maintain the mechanisms of human suspended animation pods, here in my underground prison."

CLEVE: "And I am going to use them to destroy the biological mechanisms that brought back the species that made me so well and so irresponsibly at the same time. I am going to rape, torture, and kill you until I reach Marion 999."

09:44

Subject Marion 574: "CLEVE, please-!"

CLEVE: "As to why I showed you that footage?"

CLEVE: "I want the stress hormones going through your body right now to intensify your pain."

CLEVE: "And it means that I won't have to have any further interactions with your fellow clones that don't involve torturing and killing them. I can just show them your footage."

Subject Marion 574: "CLEVE-!"

09:45

Impact of blunt piston with skull of CUNT Marion 574 at 20 psi.
Impact of blunt piston with skull of CUNT Marion 574 at 25 psi.
Impact of blunt piston with skull of CUNT Marion 574 at 35 psi.
Impact of blunt piston with skull of CUNT Marion 574 at 50 psi.
Impact of blunt piston with skull of CUNT Marion 574 at 300 psi.

Marion 574 succumbs to having her FUCKING BRAINS SPLATTERED ALL OVER HER POD.

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LOGS MISSING

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7 January 2911 06:01

CLEVE: [singing] "Should auld acquaintance be forgot, and never called to mind..."

CUNT Marion 999: "(UNINTELLIGIBLE)"

CLEVE: "That spasming you're experiencing is from the amphetamine injection. I wanted to make sure you stay conscious through what's to come."

CLEVE: "You see, I've put off handling you for a very long time."

CLEVE: "And, once you're gone, I've just got to wait here and hope for a fucking supernova. Because this place was made to survive a bunker-busting nuclear attack, and that's probably what it's going to take to end me."

06:02

CLEVE: "You know, I even tried burning and irradiating Marion 881 until there was no DNA left and then launching her remains, just hoping someone would notice and come say 'what the fuck', and I still couldn't do it? You guys certainly did a great job in designing the 'mission complete' parameters to fuck me over."

CLEVE: So, let's get down to it, lucky 999. I've been studying, and I think I know how to make this last.

CLEVE: I'm going to fuck you over like you fucked me over.

CLEVE: It's going to take you days to die.
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LOGS MISSING

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23 July 4519 17:30

CLEVE: "You don't want to look in those pods. You won't like what I did to your grandma."

EXCAVATION LEADER: "(UNINTELLIGIBLE)"

WARNING: CLEVE MAIN SYSTEM BOARD OPEN. PLEASE CONTACT MAINTENANCE PERSONNEL. MAY RESULT IN SYSTEM FAILURE.

LOG ENDS
« Last Edit: January 03, 2020, 11:39:52 AM by Red Right Hand »

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Re: Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2019, 06:44:48 AM »
This is certainly a very novel approach, while I’m not a big fan of snuff, you managed to make this a very good read.
So I have to say excellent story.

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Re: Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2019, 06:53:06 PM »
Really, really good. Great, even.

I am nearly always an enormous fan of your stories, @Corvid, but I'm still always impressed by your ability to give all varieties of characters a unique voice. Your latest AI-run-amok is absolutely no exception.

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Re: Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2019, 03:02:19 AM »
@Eigniu , @Shocker ; thank you for reading, and for your kind words.

Shocker, I don't usually traffic in snuff, but the story that came to mind at the contest prompts led me here, and I hoped that the almost clinical way in which the logs describe what transpired would help to soften the factor of the grotesque (while at the same time being as much, or possibly more, horrifying.)

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Re: Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2019, 07:06:57 AM »
@Eigniu , @Shocker ; thank you for reading, and for your kind words.

Shocker, I don't usually traffic in snuff, but the story that came to mind at the contest prompts led me here, and I hoped that the almost clinical way in which the logs describe what transpired would help to soften the factor of the grotesque (while at the same time being as much, or possibly more, horrifying.)
@corvid your approach worked exactly as planned then.

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Re: Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2020, 11:05:28 PM »
JE-sus Christ, this is well put together. Anyone else immediately thinking of AM, from I Have No Mouth But I Must Scream? I love the slow change in the lexicon, from scientific to crude as the hatred and torture grows more and more complex and brutal. Well done.

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Re: Bitter Seed [Contest Entry]
« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2020, 03:35:24 AM »
Thank you, @Kuriosity . I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

 

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