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Imperfect Houses
« on: November 20, 2019, 09:54:41 PM »
So here is a piece I have written on the spot right here. This is a free verse poem. What is free verse you poetry? Good question, basically poetry that doesn't have to rhyme because I don't like trying to write poetry that rhymes. This free verse poem is called...Imperfect Homes.

My poems open with sad opening or they open up with hard questions but they end most of the time with a hopefully ending. I also want to point out that when I make letters or parts all caps that's means screaming. Basically if I ever turned my free verse poems into songs I want them to have screaming parts and rock music. I haven't turned them into songs though.

Oh, one more thing when I say houses in here that can either mean family, or families, or homes

Imperfect Houses
November 20, 2019

Some of our houses are bad
Some of our houses are okay
Some houses good
Some houses great

Some of our houses are filled with pain
Some are filled with joy
Some are about honor
Some filled with dishonor

Will my house be a bad house?
Will your house be a bad house?

CAN WE JUST START AGAIN?
CAN WE FORGIVE?
CAN WE HAVE PEACE?
FIGHTING ISN'T GOOD!
WE DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THE COUNTRY OF MYANMAR!
THEY'RE IN A 71 YEAR CIVIL WAR!
SINCE APRIL 2, 1948!
I HOPE OUR FAMILY DOESN'T FIGHT THAT LONG!

Can we just let go?
Can we forgive?
Can we have a great house again?
Can we have a house that when we enter we're not on guard?
Can we be civil at home?
Can we be a...family?
Can we be an actually family? ...

CAN WE JUST START AGAIN?
CAN WE FORGIVE?
CAN WE HAVE PEACE?
FIGHTING ISN'T GOOD!
WE DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THE COUNTRY OF MYANMAR!
THEY'RE IN A 71 YEAR CIVIL WAR!
SINCE APRIL 2, 1948!
I HOPE OUR FAMILY DOESN'T FIGHT THAT LONG!

CAN WE JUST START AGAIN?
CAN WE FORGIVE?
CAN WE HAVE PEACE?
FIGHTING ISN'T GOOD!
WE DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THE COUNTRY OF MYANMAR!
THEY'RE IN A 71 YEAR CIVIL WAR!
SINCE APRIL 2, 1948!
I HOPE OUR FAMILY DOESN'T FIGHT THAT LONG!

It takes one party to surrender for there to be a type of "peace"
If both parties surrender?
Then that's amazing
Maybe we can all forgive?
Can we start again?
Just remember every house is imperfect
« Last Edit: November 20, 2019, 09:57:03 PM by Shadowborn »
1 Corinthians 13

 

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